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(po angielsku)



Rotten

See me among all my sins
Taste my blood, consume me
And take my soul

Tie a stones to hands and legs
Cut my wings and look at me
When I'll fall

Don't try to kill me
Poison - your soul
I'll try to live still...
Don't try to kill me
Poison - your soul
Falling in darkness...

I feel death in all your space
You're cutting my rotten veins
To make me crumble

I have destroyed eyes with blood
How can I see any light
If am I blind?

Don't try to kill me
Poison - your soul
I'll try to live still...
Don't try to kill me
Poison - your soul
Falling in darkness...

I don't wake up
When I wipe my eyes from blood
My soul is spurned
My bleeding heart missed burn

Don't try to kill me
Poison - your soul
I'll try to live still...
Don't try to kill me
Poison - your soul
Falling in darkness...

You tried to kill me
Poison - your soul
I'll try to live still...
I tried to kill you
Poison - your soul
Falling in darkness...

Watch my pain, and kill my soul
Cut my wings, don't let me go
Try to kill me, tell me fall
Build my grave with hate and stone