Co sądzicie o mojej piosence po poprawkach..:&

e, a, D, e
You, me, we, in the lights of stars
i can see the sky above us
i wonder what in my life really makes sense
what is the alternative to evil
and then you hug me and evil becomes good
beautiful, human , wonderful
it's only you who can separate me from the world full of hate

D, A, C, G, e, G, …
ref. wow! the way you affect me ... how do you do it, that when you're close, everything is pretty and cute? your body, your sight, the power you give me every day...

e, a, D, e
suddenly i wake up to reality.
no, it's just an illusion...
oh, when I lose myself,
i cannot see the truth, that it's you, you, you,
you are just my dream,
the fulfillment of all my dreams, and my desire... no!

D, A, C, G, e, G, …
ref. wow! the way you affect me ... how do you do it, that when you're close, everything is pretty and cute? your body, your sight, the power you give me every day...

…
So many beautiful days, dreaming of you. I losing control yee…

a, e, G, d
Dream, sweet dream... my angel! please, make it true, sweet truth. that day i do not want to feel the fear.


Ps na gorze są akordy , ktore gram na gitarze..:))


Tak wgl to mam jeszce dwie fajne piosenki po polsku..:D