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Sam napisałem. Fajna ?

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manky24 pkt
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Give me just a moment because it's so soon. Give me a second chance to stay in the middle of a perfect day with the air of a rat and I was looking for words to say. Give me a second chance and everything will be different. Dance with you at every disco. Sla is paid to you. But everything is destroyed. Dreams evaporated today as soap bubbles and the meaning of life is gone. Faith in love suddenly an abomination to me. All because of you, but I must admit that I do not regret it when we talked about "a pair". One thing I know. Today everything has changed. Because this time telling us that we have dreams. Now I know. You reduce me. But the feeling does not go away because it tells the heart to do otherwise.
Pewnie roi się od błędów, ale proszę o wyrozumiałość.

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NIEZŁE!!!!!!!!! SUPER! ;)
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ciocialodzia69

15 lat temu

Chyba zamiast ostatniego słowa "otherwise" powinno być "diferent"
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manky

15 lat temu

Super :).Za bardzo się na tym nie znam ,ale odwaliłeś kawał dobrej roboty.:)
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Thenugile

15 lat temu